I actually didn't make that one, I borrowed it, but I could make one for the story, that's a good idea BTW, I wasn't sure where exactly you were going with this part, so I just went with it - tell me if it's lame and I'll re-write

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She wasn't sure whether or not he'd let her drive, but is excited nevertheless. The only other cars she's driven besides her Jetta have been Alex's truck and Kyle's sports car, which wasn't all that great anyway.

Maria climbs in and starts the engine without Max.

C'mon, just let me get the feel of this thing and I'll come back to pick you up.

No sooner had she gotten about ten yards away from Max, sirens begin to echo in her ears, as well as faint screams of her name, so she frantically pulls in from the back entrance, and when she reaches Max, throws on the brakes and opens the passenger door.

"Get in, now!"

She knows Max is about ready to kill her, but he jumps in regardless and Maria heads quickly for the main road again.

Edited: Part two of the story can be found here: Continue Part 2 Here!