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Zook -   Awww... Bunnie - Quote: Quote:
Are we going to school tomorrow or not?
Not sure - are we? Is the summer over yet? I think whether Maria and I go depends on how long you guys are gonna keep it night-time...  Zook - Quote: Quote:
Okay, I'm half in love with Michael after reading those parts.
Awww. Thank you so much!  I'm so glad you liked his parts!  Spicy- Quote: Quote:
knows that once she goes Guerin, there's no coming back
 I'm all fainting over this line. ANd the part was awesome! I dunno where you get those freaky ideas that your parts might suck from.  
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Not sure - are we? Is the summer over yet? I think whether Maria and I go depends on how long you guys are gonna keep it night-time...
See that's what I wanted to know myself?  I haven't a clue... I was just asking how you guys were going, since tomorrow Max and Liz have to go back to the reservation-- but wasn't sure if that was going to be *after* school or what? I'm all sorts of confused on that part. 
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Well, actually bunnie, I'm not sure exactly where we're headed because either it's the hot and wild monkey sex or not, so... I can't really confirm one or the other. Michael's the lead in this "episode."   Quote: Quote:
I dunno where you get those freaky ideas that your parts might suck from.
Aww, thanks 
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Michael's the lead in this "episode."
Cool, huh? I finally got her to admit that it's me who's in charge. Bunnie - Errr...Okay. Shall we just all go back to school then? Or is there a particular reason for which you remembered school all of a sudden, like, do you need it for your storyline, or is it just because of the reservation? Then it wouldn't really make much difference. Oh well, the first day of school after the summer is never long and hard anyway, so we might as well go. It'll be fun to see the Eraser Room again. What do you guys think? + Edited: Quote: Quote:
HEY! Stalker! I just noticed that you did the whole "click me" "click me, too" thing just like me! Did you "edit, copy, paste"?
Yep, I did. I always do. I liked the colors you used, so I figured, cool, go with them. And about the links...it's a pretty good idea to put in "click me" cuz I noticed that this forum doesn't put up different colors for links and normal text, so unless you pass your mouse over it or know you're supposed to click you might not see it. Sorry for "stealing" though. 
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This deserves a new post, so you get no more editing. And please note that I dutifully dragged myself over here to comment instead of typing right away on the RPG thread as I was longing to do... OH MY GOD.Which one of you came up with that amazing, breathtaking idea? I swear, you guys are RPG Gods, errr...Godesses. I'm still all fighting to breathe over here...Not only was the idea fantastic, unbelievably so (I never did see that one coming), and it's so great it all being a dream because it will make especially Max wonder whether the questions that have been answered in his dream will be true or just a product of his imagination, which means more thrill, which means more great posts.   And then the posts themselves: Kick ass, girls, honestly! .thud "spiraling out of control": best line in a post ever - it so set the stage for what was about to come, and boy, did you make him spiral. The way his world seemed to shift without him noticing first and then him seeing the truth behind what he thought was real... I still can't get over how well the imagery worked. That was one amazing, fantastic post, honestly! I am completely fainting over this new storyline, it is unbelievable, it takes the RPG drama onto an entirely new level! And the best part is, it has nothing to do with the sappy drama you get in some of those fanfics, it's incredibly intense, and very well resolved. The feelings come across so well, I could literally feel what he felt... . *sigh* More, please. I'm addicted now.
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do you need it for your storyline, or is it just because of the reservation? Then it wouldn't really make much difference.
Nope, makes no difference to me at all. I just didn't want to send them to the reservation if they had to be in school first. And we have been in summer? I didn't know that. Cool! Quote: Quote:
I finally got her to admit that it's me who's in charge.
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(I never did see that one coming),
Funny you say that. I did leave clues with it all over the place. Actually, that was why I picked that song "sometimes the song tells the story you can't" -- Look at the first lyrics before they went into the dream sequence Quote: Quote:
I took a walk around the world to
Ease my troubled mind
I left my body laying somewhere
In the sands of time
Usually, when you leave your body lying someplace and you get up to walk-- your actually dreaming. And I loved the part on sands of time, because that was were I was going with it. And then if you notice I kept wanting to post the word "feel" with M&T- but struggled because he could see it, not necessairly feel it. (So you'll see a lot of "watching" "watched" ) Quote: Quote:
The way his world seemed to shift without him noticing first and then him seeing the truth behind what he thought was real
Okay, and OMG. It actually made a damn bit of sense? Thank you so much Stalker! I swear my head was going mad trying to accomplish that one. A dream, and then a dream(reality at one point) inside of that dream, and then a vision threw the source inside of the dream inside of a dream. It was like three different realities or versions that I kept trying to tie together. And make sense of it. I was screaming at one point of utter confusion myself and the word complicated kept coming up alot . I figured I'd lose everyone on that one and need to edit a thousand more times. 
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Damn, I had hoped I had made i prefectly clear that that post kicked major ass! Cause it did. I think it came across perfectly, and even though I didn't catch onto the fact that the word "feel" was being replaced by "watch" to indicate the dream sequence, I did notice that there had been an awful lot of focussing on expression - it came across perfectly and very pointed, too, for that matter. Amazing, really. Oh, and about "Kryptonite": I just totally zoned out when I read the lyrics, kept playing it over and over in my head, and totally missed on deeper meanings. Sorry. I know I'm a bad reader. Quote: Quote:
And we have been in summer? I didn't know that.
Uh, well, I remember at some point we were in summer... Like, after Destiny because the "season" was over. It might really have benn over ages ago, the summer, I mean, and I just didn't notice. Everything's possible with me.
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Stalker, so glad you liked the twist of events. Jen gets all the credit for coming up the idea, I just followed along. And Jen, that post was amazing! When I read it, I was like, "Now how am I supposed to follow up with that?" Awesome writing, as always!
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Did Michael just take Maria's shirt off?
Yeah, I... really think he did Are you sure about the lyrics? If the song isn't right, tell me! We can change it to whatever you want
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Well, if he hadn't before, now he sure as hell has. Slap him if he goes too far. No, no, the lyrics are amazing! It's the song that's playing in the RPG thread, right?
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Slap him if he goes too far.
I don't think that will happen 
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daed cool. I think he's nervous BTW. And I am going insane with taht scene - it took me a damn half an hour to write that last post! And they're not even so far down the line yet...
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I know! Same with Maria! It took her ten minutes to write her name
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LMAO! Why does it seem to me you're avoiding the RPG? I only see you poting on this thread here... Come on, pick up the fight against the scene demons...
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Avoiding? More like writing
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I'm sorry Spice I didn't mean to trick you. Well... maybe just a *little*. But just not you, I mean NO one knew about the *dream* except well Tess obviously. And honestly, if you did know about it-- wouldn't of have been as emotional as it was now, would it have been? Quote: Quote:
Jen gets all the credit for coming up the idea, I just followed along. And Jen, that post was amazing! When I read it, I was like, "Now how am I supposed to follow up with that?" Awesome writing, as always!
Jenny--- Wow.  See now I'm gonna cry. You guys are amazing! And I just *have* to say this.. I nearly fell over when I read that "Now how am I supposed to follow up with that?" line... Because your not the first one that's said that. Quite ironic you and Liz there. And Stalker- I still just can't register how you could even consider putting me in a realm of fanfic writers. OMG. Not even possible. But it is amazing how much faith you have in me and that is why I enjoy writing it. Quote: Quote:
it took me a damn half an hour to write that last post!
Damn, do I know that feeling. Although, I only *wish* I could write the majority of my parts that quickly. I can't seem to go any faster than 2 hours at the minimum. Usually, it takes a week or longer though. I think I spend just a *little* too much time on this thing.
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I think I spend just a *little* too much time on this thing.
Yeah, tell me about it... I obsess about Michael all the time anyway, and now I have to additionally deal with weird flashes of M&M in the most compromising situations... I came here to say I loved your last post, Cory, it was amazing! I loved the way Liz had the flashes of Max even in awakened state, you did incorporate that into the post very well. Liz rocks!
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I have NO time to write now, as much as I want to, because I've got a show to watch in less than half an hour and there's this little thing called nervousness which prevents Maria from writing her part in less than an hour...
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