Thanks Cory and Spice! But do tell-- why all the dramatic "ohno"'s?

And the funniest thing happened this morning- I thought I'd share. I struggled with Kyle for like 2 hours last night, and then, this morning on the way to the grocery store, Clay A's new song came on the radio: "The Way" and I just laughed SO damn hard because of the lyics. They were just so "in character" for Kyle. Too bad I hadn't heard the song last night.

Spice-- to answer your question on the other RPG- No, I didn't have any plans with what I posted. I did it mainly because you wanted to steal it, remember? And then I added drama (when do I not? ) because of the title-- "Roadtrip from HELL"-- other than that, I haven't a clue. (Trust me when I say that, because I always have plots lined up in the back of my head for the main one. ) So, honestly, I do not.

Hi!

MAX! *frantic waving* Oh, they are both back, amazing!

I love, love, love this line, because knowing what I know (and Max doesn't), it is so great because so cryptic and yet ambiguous! And it fits M&L perfectly - the mass destruction? It's how Max would gladly put anything on hold for Liz and their love, if only she let him, not caring what that would cause because it's the only thing that truly means something to him.

Oh, yes, and Kyle! he stole my line! I nearly fell off my chair here! But in a good way. I loved the part where he goes under water because he has that attack of panic. And I also loved that he said he didn't want this to ever end - he's doomed. Poor Kyle.

Very nice, girl!

Ah, damn, I nearly forgot - Alex and Isabel, very cute, too. Trust Alex to do homework when the world is falling apart, and I love Isabel's annyoed tone.

It did not suck I thought it was kinda cute. But if you want to edit it, if you're unhappy with it, then it's up to you because it's your post, which was great I was contemplating whether or not Maria would stop kissing him, but then I was like "well, it is Maria, and she's... hmm. I don't know. Weird."

Thank you!

And Jenny - whoa, I see hot Michael in your sig! First pic on the left... what a back!

Spice - Exactly. I'm off to edit in a sec. I don't think Michael would stop kissing Maria over a freaking button either.

Stalker-- Stop editing! I love your parts!

And this parts been bothering me with curiousity--


Which one?
I was *trying* to add three dimension to his character like we were talking about, that and I was *trying* to add the *ironic* parts of how him and Tess are very much alike... and now I'm like, Crap- too Michael?

OH and just wanted to say about that one line you mentioned about Max-- that is so funny! Because I never even thought that as I typed it, but now thinking about it-- you are SO right! Good catch!

Stalker, yeah, I mean it was amazing as hell But you're right, stopping the kissing over a button? Go fix



I forgot to mention - about a week ago, or so, I think, Maria nearly started crying because she missed Liz and didn't want Max to leave. It's a good thing Liz is back because Maria's happy now

Really? *awwww- claps hand* Very cool! And it was sort of cool how it came out-- because at first I was only trying to make him more real-- but then I thought about it and was like, no he was 'alone' alot: even in his 'fame'. And then at the end I was like, "Oh, wow-- they are SO much the same, I love it!"

Spice-- Awwww Yeah, I missed her alot too! I mean, there just isn't a Max without a Liz, right?

Stalker--


OHHH. Okay. Gosh, I don't even remember that part. I tend to get stuck on the cliffhangers (you wonder why )
I just liked the whole scenerio where they are half naked, yet- he's exposed himself (internally) even more than that now.



Yeah, me too! Cause I didn't even catch that part! I was debating whether or not he would "know" the "truth" or not, and if he did, would he reveal it to the readers or not, in the end - he didn't reveal it, but I still want to believe that he does know.

Spice - Thankies! I'm hoping to be on it in a sec.

Bunnie - Yeah, I thought that part was really awesome, because you're right: to be popular the way Kyle is/ was, it takes a lot of masks to keep things that way because you always have to pretend to be someone else and never show any weaknesses.

And, wait, you think Max "knows" already?

Stalker-- No. He's a dumbass! I was referring to Riverdog.

Spice-- I heard that comment over there!

The one in the Jeep?

-- I'll have to go find him tonight, huh?